There is no venom in my bite, love, I'm not that kind of snake.
Neil McKay
September 13, 2014
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But I think I want to include it in a larger poem or let it stand as a fragment.
Clayton Medeiros
September 15, 2014
It reads to me like there is more to be said, more to be explored, more to be revealed.
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Neil McKay
September 13, 2014
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It also works as a haiku
But I think I want to include it in a larger poem or let it stand as a fragment.
Clayton Medeiros
September 15, 2014
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Yes
It reads to me like there is more to be said, more to be explored, more to be revealed.